TASK 1 You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. In the letter, you should: • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints

Dear Sir, My name is John. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the
room
of your hotel Express Inn where I stayed for one week. The car which you arranged for the pick-up was late to arrive at the hotel. ,
,
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Furthermore
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the
room
was not ready on time and I had to wait for 30 minutes. ,
,
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Moreover
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the air condition of the
room
was not working properly, despite
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the complaints the a/c engineer came the next day into the
room
which made it difficult for me to sleep.
In addition
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the mini-bar refrigerator in the
room
was not working properly and drinks were cold.
Apart from
this
housekeeping service staff rang the bell of the
room
,
while
it was on DND. I would like to request you to improve your services and refund half of the amount. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully. John
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
  • ...which I encountered during my recent stay at...
  • The first issue was...
  • Additionally, I found that...
  • Moreover, the... was not up to standard.
  • I suggest that...
  • This experience has left me...
  • I hope you will address these concerns promptly by...
  • To improve your service, you could...
  • As a form of compensation, I would appreciate...
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