Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs – need to feel challenged and also wanted more benefits describe your new job – whole new experience / I have never worked on it before / love it tell him/her your other news – next month I’ll travel to Europe

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Dear Sania, Hope

this

letter finds you in your radiant spirit.How is everything going and what about the weather in Canada?

Last

month I told you that I was planning to change my job as I was not satisfied with being an employee at Burger King.The schedule was very hectic and even I was unable to spend quality time with my family as I have to reach work on time. Fortunately, I got an offer from Amazon

last

week .I cleared my interview and got hired as Process Assistant in the Shipdock department.I am having all the benefits including health insurance.

Moreover

,they will offer me a package of sunglasses and shoes on a yearly basis.Since all the associates belong to my community so it becomes easy for me to work over there.The management team is so nice and always encourages me to do better.

Additionally

,you will be more than happier to know that I am coming to Europe next month.I am very excited to meet you. See you soon. Regards, Kiran

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

169 words

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