the diagram below shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment.

the diagram below shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment.
The diagram depicts the process
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using digital photographic equipment in order to produce photographs. In the first part of
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, the production of photographs
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three main tools,
digital
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a digital
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camera,
computer
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and printer. Following, with digital cameras we can do many stuff
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image
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and smart
card
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.
Then
, by downloading
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from the
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camera we transfer
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our PC to continue the procedure by editing pictures or improving the resolution and quality.
In addition
, we can send the file by email to another email address or we can store a picture by using compact disks. Meanwhile, it would be perfect to have a printer to print different styles of
photos
.
For example
, colour
photos
and black and white
photos
but it is necessary to put photo paper in order to print them.
Overall
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we can generate
photos
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Moreover
, we have two options, to share it, store it for the future or continue the cycle by printing them.
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