the diagram below shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment.
The diagram depicts the process
by
using digital photographic equipment in order to produce photographs.
In the first part of Change preposition
of
process
, the production of photographs Add an article
the process
need
three main tools, Change the verb form
needs
digital
camera, Correct article usage
a digital
computer
and printer. Following, with digital cameras we can do many stuff Correct article usage
a computer
such
as recording, capturing
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and capturing
image
and smart Fix the agreement mistake
images
card
. Fix the agreement mistake
cards
Then
, by downloading image
from the Fix the agreement mistake
images
,
camera we transfer Remove the comma
apply
it
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them
into
our PC to continue the procedure by editing pictures or improving the resolution and quality. Change preposition
to
In addition
, we can send the file by email to another email address or we can store a picture by using compact disks. Meanwhile, it would be perfect to have a printer to print different styles of photos
. For example
, colour photos
and black and white photos
but it is necessary to put photo paper in order to print them.
Overall
, the process contains three parts and finally
we can generate Add a comma
,finally
photos
from digital equipment. Moreover
, we have two options, to share it, store it for the future or continue the cycle by printing them.Submitted by javadsaady1992 on
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