You recently discovered plans to build a new airport in your area and are unhappy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter •say how you found out about the plans •explain what problems your neighborhood will face •suggest some possible solutions to those problems.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in order to share my grievances on
the new plans to build an Change preposition
about
airport
in my area. Let me explain to you below in detail.
I am a resident of Ashok Nagar in Mumbai. I read an article which was published in the Times of India, dated 23rd of June,2023, on the upcoming airport
project in my locality. I am disappointed with this
approach because there is an educational institute in the vicinity, and the noise created by the airplane
would be quite disturbing for the student at the college. Change the spelling
aeroplane
Moreover
, as you would be aware, there are many old aged personnel residing in my area. Therefore
, the noise pollution would be very hazardous for
their health as well. Change preposition
to
Further
, as compared to the entire city, most towers are located in my area. Therefore
, having an airport
here does not seem to be advisable.
Hence
, rather than creating an airport
in my locality, if you could utilise the Thane district for this
project, that would be helpful. This
is because the buildings over there are of maximum five storeyed. Further
, if you still wish to go ahead with a locality in Mumbai, then
I would suggest you extend the number of lanes to the existing airport
as there is still ample space available over there. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Kathleen MorganSubmitted by prabhunisha0994 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite