There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the immense competition in the job market and organizations constantly looking for highly qualified

people

,

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academic success has gained

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paramount importance among young

people

.

However

, some argue that non-academic courses are equally important

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core

subjects

.

This

essay explores the two

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perspectives

and concludes with a personal opinion on the issue.

Firstly

, the mounting pressure amongst today's youth to achieve high educational standing is

due to

the large amount of workforce

that is

being released into the

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market every year.

Although

a majority of graduates have a similar background, employers assess the candidate based on quality, which is reflected by the grades

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fundamental

subjects

.

For instance

, a student may have excellent

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in cooking,

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applying for an office job they are only evaluated based on their capability to calculate

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sales and profits. It is instances like these that compel

people

to consider removing non-core

subjects

from the syllabus

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attention towards the fundamental courses. On the other side of the argument are the

people

who want the non-academic programs to be part of the schooling. Their point of view on

this

issue is

also

valid as not every student aspires

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office or a sales job.

For example

,

people

who aspire to become a chef or excel in sports may benefit from these

subjects

.

Hence

it is important for young minds to have a platform for all interests as everyone and schools should be responsible for providing these facilities. Though there are different arguments and reasons supporting both sides of

this

problem, I personally believe that having non-academic courses is important as they can equip

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youngsters with general life skills and teach them the ability to think

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of the box. In

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I disagree with the idea of solely focusing on academic work in schooling.