The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The line graph compares the daily amount of
electric
usage during Replace the word
electricity
summer
and winter
in Britain and the pie chart shows the proportion of the
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apply
electricity
used for
.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the demand for electricity
in winter
is much higher than in summer
. The majority of the consumption of electricity
is used for heating water and rooms.
Demand for electricity
is at its lowest in both summer
and winter
between 6am and 9am, at around 14000 units
and just above 30000 units
respectively. The usage of electricity
in summer
continues to rise and reaches at
peak of 20000 Correct your spelling
a
units
between 12 noon and 3pm, while
the figure in winter
in the afternoon increases and at
its highest between 9pm and midnight, at around 43000 Add a missing verb
is at
units
.
Most British people using
electric power for heating rooms and water, it accounts for 52.5% of the proportion. Wrong verb form
use
Followd
by 17.5% of Correct your spelling
Followed
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population
using Add an article
the population
for
washing machines, ovens and kettles. The remaining 30% shows Change preposition
apply
an
equal Correct article usage
apply
pecentages
for lighting, tv and radio Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
catagory
, and Correct your spelling
category
vaccum
cleaners, food mixers and electric tools Correct your spelling
vacuum
group
.Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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