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The chart below compares the number of people per household* by percentage in the UK in 1981 and 2001.

The chart below compares the number of people per household* by percentage in the UK in 1981 and 2001.
#people #household* #percentage #uk
The bar chart illustrates the distribution of
people
 living together in one family in the United Kingdom in the
years
 1981 and 2001.
It is clear that
 during the observed
years
, households with 2
people
 took up the largest percentage
while
 the opposite was true for those with 6
people
.
Besides
, there was a decrease in the sum of members living in households with more than 3
people
,
whereas
 families having no more than 2
people
 saw an increase.  As can be seen, in the 2 researched
years
, families having 2
people
 were recorded to be at the top of the list. They made up 31% in 1981, compared to 34% of the UK population in 2001. Meanwhile, the proportion of
people
 who lived alone stood at 17% in 1981 and
then
 rose significantly to 26% within 20
years
.
By contrast
, the total of families which had over 3 members was fewer. Approximately 20% was taken up by houses with 3-4
people
 in 1981, over the next 2 decades, the figure for those witnessed a drop of 3%.
Likewise
, households with 5 and 6 members
also
 declined from about 8% in the year 1981 to 6% and 2% in 2001 respectively.
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