You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
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I attended the concert held in the national park
last
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in a function in school. That encouragement boosted my confidence and now I am able to perform before a bigger crowd.
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, I am aware that you do not give personal classes but I would be very appreciated if you grant me a favour and give me one of two personal sessions.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Regards,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite