You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Sam, I attended the concert held in the national park
last
week. I was very amazed by your
performance
especially your
guitar
performance
was marvellous as it gave me chills. I have heard many singers playing the
guitar
but I have never seen someone playing the cords the way you did. I was completely lost
while
listening to your
performance
. I
also
play
guitar
and member of a local music
club
. I
along with
my group from the
club
have performed in schools and colleges. I have playing
guitar
and doing musical activities since my school. I once received a prize for my
performance
in a function in school. That encouragement boosted my confidence and now I am able to perform before a bigger crowd. I heard some people discussing during the concert that you run your own musical
club
and teach students how to play the
guitar
and guide them on how to gain vocal control. I am
also
interested in joining your
club
to improve my
guitar
-playing skills.
However
, I am aware that you do not give personal classes but I would be very appreciated if you grant me a favour and give me one of two personal sessions. I am eagerly waiting for your response. Regards, Paul
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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