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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #time #loss #species #plants #animals
In
this
 century,
regarding
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increasing
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the increasing
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of
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population and new technology
societies
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society's
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 lifestyle has been
charged
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changed
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. In
this
 way, some people believe that
loss
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the loss
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 of particular
spices
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species
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 of
plants
 and
animals
are
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is
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 the
majer
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major
 environmental
problems
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problem
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 but others think that there are more important than
plants
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plant
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 or
animals
problems
. So, in
this
 essay, I will look at both sites of issues and give an example
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 them.
Firstly
,
new
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generation
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 lifestyle is changed. They have
very
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 fast
life
 method because they are consumed
the
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 world sources too rapidly.
Therefore
, not only do they
lost
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 their responsibility
about
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for
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 keeping the environment
such
 as trees or mountains but they
also
 destroy animal's
life
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living
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life
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like birds.
For example
,recent charts show that some countries are
polluted
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 the
world
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world's
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 seas because of waste contamination water which causes disease for special sea
animals
 like snakes. In
this
 way, because of
increasing
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the increasing
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of
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population governments try to extend cities by cutting down the forest and
make
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making
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 countryside residents. So, they destroy
habitats
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the habitats
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 of rear species of
animals
 and
plants
 in the jungle.
On the other hand
, others believe that there are more important environmental
problems
 like
nukler
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nuclear
nuker
* energy.
thus
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, they believe that neither it can remove
plants
 and
animals
 nor it can destroy human
life
. But,
unfortunately
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 powers use
this
 technology to make
a
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electricity power and nuclear weapons too.
For example
, in the second war between USA and Japan in 1945,
USE
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the USE
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 government used that weapon for one of the metropolitan cities which
name
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named
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 is HIROSHIMA and destroyed the
hole
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whole
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 city in the second world war they made a big calamity.
Therefore
, because
of
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that
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 war
expensive
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, new societies think that they have
important
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more important
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problems
 than
plants
 or
animals
. In conclusion, in recent
century
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centuries
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 powers destroy
forest
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forests
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 and
animals
 habitat for making modern residents for their citizens.
On the other hand
, they use nuclear technology to make
powers
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power
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 and weapons
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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