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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To waht extent do you agree ot disagree?

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Speaking in a foreign language could cause a lot of difficulties if you have no other choice to communicate with. Social problems are one of the important subjects that may have a direct impact on life quality when you don't speak your native language.
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 with, if you have always been understood by your society, you probably don't know how it feels to experience another way. Being understood is highly important in social life
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 talking with other words rather than your original could build a high wall between what you are trying to say and what you are capable of.
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, Consider a man who has immigrated to a new country recently, Meanwhile, he is strange with the culture and religion there, and he has to find another form of speaking whole different from his.
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, Living in an atmosphere where everybody is talking with each other without any pressure of being misunderstood or being afraid of insulting your friends irrationally, may cause you
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stress and in the long ,term you are going to be frustrated.
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, you will find yourself in a store repeating your one-line dialogue with the receptionist over and over to make sure you are saying it right, Which is something that will stay in your mind and make a big influence on your confidence.
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, Interaction in other civilisations may be so interesting,
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 frightening. To speak in other people's words you have to first try to talk with their minds. It has a way of their social life.
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