The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
The following charts provide data about the
price
of tickets on one airlane between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over two weeks in 2013.
Overall
, the highest
price
to Melbourne was on
Monday
in 1
week
while
the highest
price
for the
second
week
was on Friday. The
price
in the first
week
to Melbourne the
price
was fluctuating throughout the whole period. The lowest prices were on Tuesday and Wednesday, they were both the same over 30
dollars
. It was
also
the same days and
price
in
week
2. One of the main differences was
Monday
, in comparison, 1
week
was 80
dollars
, and the
second
week
was 30
dollars
less.
Furthermore
,
according to
the information below, in the first
week
, the prices for tickets to Sydney were 60
dollars
on
Monday
,
in contrast
, the
second
week
was cheaper( 40
dollars
). The three days after
Monday
were the same, the
price
was approximately 30
dollars
. The highest
price
in the
second
week
was on Friday but still was 20
dollars
cheaper than the first
week
.
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