In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are so popular? What is your opinion of crime friction and tv crime dramas?

The increasing popularity of
crime
novels and
crime related
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tv shows
are
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experienced around the world. It may be because of their
differnt
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different
writing style, or it could be because
how
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they show the lifestyle of a criminal
,
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before they are caught. Mostly
money
fraudsters
tends
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to follow a rich lifestyle, having multiple cars, living in a big house, visiting
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different
countries, or just
thowing
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throwing
money
like a crazy person.
Money
is something everybody
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, which makes their
story
more exciting. Here we are discussing some
a
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different
style
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of writing involved in
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crime related
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entertainment and
also
why
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people drive towards
such
stories.
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style in
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crime related
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entertainment has a unique way,
by
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constructing each plot with some
open ended
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question
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in the
viewer
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viewer's
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minds
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mind
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, and the suspense of whether the criminal will get caught
at the end
, or will he escape. The suspense build
thoughout
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throughout
the
story
,
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and get
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get
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the audience on the edge of their seat.
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of
such
stories always
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a
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different
way of describing a
story
, by mystifying plots, which
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find
extreamly
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extremely
interesting. In
adition
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addition
to that,
mostly
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most
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crime
shows are focused on displaying the lavish lifestyle a criminal
live
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and
quick
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the quick
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money
earned by taking shortcuts. Everyone
aspire
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become
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to become
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rich someday, and
money
is one of the
reason
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that
bind
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binds
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the audience to the
story
. In the pursuit of living
such
a fancy life, some
of
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people do get inspired by
such
criminals, which could be a caveat. The news
also
play
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a bigger
of
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role in promoting a
crime
drama. Because
mostly
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most
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all the news
channel
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channels
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are showing
the
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crime
occured
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occurred
all around us, and if in the future anyone
write
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writes
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a
story
on any
such
incident, everyone is curious to know what
had
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happened.
For example
, a series called The Delhi
Crime
is
a
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trending on Netflix.
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the end, I would
appriciate
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appreciate
all
such
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writers
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who are creating
such
good content for their viewer, and hope to get many more
such
entertainment in the near future.
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