In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are so popular? What is your opinion of crime friction and tv crime dramas?

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The increasing popularity of

crime

novels and

crime related

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tv shows

are

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experienced around the world. It may be because of their

differnt

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different

writing style, or it could be because

how

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of how

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they show the lifestyle of a criminal

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before they are caught. Mostly

money

fraudsters

tends

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to follow a rich lifestyle, having multiple cars, living in a big house, visiting

difffernt

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different

countries, or just

thowing

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throwing

money

like a crazy person.

Money

is something everybody

want

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, which makes their

story

more exciting. Here we are discussing some

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different

style

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of writing involved in

the

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crime related

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entertainment and

also

why

the

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people drive towards

such

stories.

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style in

the

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crime related

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entertainment has a unique way,

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constructing each plot with some

open ended

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question

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in the

viewer

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viewer's

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minds

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, and the suspense of whether the criminal will get caught

at the end

, or will he escape. The suspense build

thoughout

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throughout

the

story

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get

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the audience on the edge of their seat.

Writer

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such

stories always

have

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differnt

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different

way of describing a

story

, by mystifying plots, which

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find

extreamly

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extremely

interesting. In

adition

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addition

to that,

mostly

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most

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crime

shows are focused on displaying the lavish lifestyle a criminal

live

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and

quick

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the quick

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money

earned by taking shortcuts. Everyone

aspire

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become

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rich someday, and

money

is one of the

reason

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that

bind

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the audience to the

story

. In the pursuit of living

such

a fancy life, some

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the

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people do get inspired by

such

criminals, which could be a caveat. The news

also

play

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a bigger

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role in promoting a

crime

drama. Because

mostly

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most

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all the news

channel

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are showing

the

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crime

occured

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occurred

all around us, and if in the future anyone

write

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writes

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story

on any

such

incident, everyone is curious to know what

had

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happened.

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, a series called The Delhi

Crime

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trending on Netflix.

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the end, I would

appriciate

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appreciate

all

such

writer

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writers

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who are creating

such

good content for their viewer, and hope to get many more

such

entertainment in the near future.

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In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are so popular? What is your opinion of crime friction and tv crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

Universities and colleges are now offering courses through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Other think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both view and give your opinions.

Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions? Provide examples and explanations.