The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These plans depict a public square after being established in 1920 and the same park nowadays. It is clear from the graph that the grange garden constructed many seats in the middle of the garden.
According to
what is shown, when we start from the southern entrance we notice that the seats were grouped in the middle around a
rose
greenhouse and altered the fountain by the
rose
backyard. To the right of the south ,entrance the glasshouse changed to a water feature.
While
the stage for musicians was converted into an amphitheatre for concerts. As for the
rose
garden on the left south of the entrance is demolished and built with a cafe ,obviously it was three
rose
gardens in the 1920s and now there are two.
While
the pond for water plants is in the corner of the forest it is turned into a children's play area.
To sum up
, we could say that the benches are grouped around the
rose
backyard,unlike the ones that were scattered in 1920.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alterations
  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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