You have recently been on a vacation in a foreign country and stayed at a home-stay, you have realised that you have misplaced an expensive wristwatch and cannot find it. Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .........
Dear John,
How are you doing? I arrived a few days ago. I hope your family is doing well and you are having a good time. I miss you a lot especially those beach days were awesome.
When I reached home I realised that I
am
missing my wristband Wrong verb form
was
watch
. I was staying at Victoria Street with Uncle Joan. I want you to go there and find out my watch
. I was staying 2nd floor. On the 2nd floor right hand there is a wardrobe I want u to check my watch
there in the drawer. I will give you the details of the watch
It's a Rolex watch
that I bought especially for this
trip. It's an expensive watch
and a limited edition watch
. It has a horse design on the dial and the strap is brown in colour. ,Moreover
diamond is studded on the Add a comma
Moreover,
watch
.
Once you find the watch
I want you to courier the watch
to me. Whatever the charges are I will pay you. As I am running out of space I want you to call me once you get to watch
so that I am stress-free.
Yours faithfully,
SteveSubmitted by vishwakarma.mangesh68 on
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task response
The letter should focus on expressing gratitude for the stay and politely requesting assistance in finding the watch. It's important to provide clear details about the lost item and the host family. Address any inquiries regarding the completion of the task and request for the return. The response is incomplete and lacks clarity of information and intent.
coherence cohesion
The letter lacks a formal opening and closing greeting. It is essential to maintain a formal and respectful tone throughout the letter. Additionally, the overall coherence and cohesion could be improved with the use of appropriate paragraphing to present clear and organized ideas.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,