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Some people believe that restoration of old building costs too much. We should demolish them and build new one instead. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #restoration #costs
The line graph illustrates the movements in
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 rate of UK
women
 in 6 age groups during the period of 1973 to 2008.
Overall
,
women
 aged from 30 to 39 experienced an increase in the amount of birth rate
while
 the opposite was true for those from under 20 to 29, 40 and over years old. It can be seen that in 1973, with 1000
women
 at the age of 30-35, about 70 infants were born
while
 in the same period, the birth rate for UK
women
 aged 35-39 was 40 per 1000 people in the population. There was a steady rise in the number of births in these two groups.
At the end
 of the time observed, the figures for
women
 aged 30-35 and 35-39 were roughly 80 and 60 respectively.
Additionally
, having reached its peak at 140 births per 1000 people in 1973, the figure for
women
 that are 25 to 29 years old witnessed a gradual decline, falling to exactly 120 births in 2008.
However
, the number was still higher than those of any other
ages
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. The trend tended to be similar for
women
 aged under 20, 25 to 29 and 40 and over. They started at nearly 120, 60 and 20 sequentially and decreased to around 40, 90 and 15 after 35 years.
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