It has become increasingly common for many pupils
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problems
in their school , leading to deteriorating standards of
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. Some people believe that parents should negotiate responsibilities with
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lives .
However
, I think we should look after the lives of
students
. In
this
we should discuss
this
problem.
No one can deny the fact that it is important to take care of the physical and mental health of
students
in school and we should sympathize with
problems
which
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, but recently ,
students
do not have the freedom to do anything and are stressed about scores.
The immediate result it produces is pupils have
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standard of living , so they have many
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about health like depression .Perhaps the most obvious result of
that is
students
will have deteriorating standards of
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like suicide or
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vices .Nothing could be apparent
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evidence that
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the Correct article usage
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suicide has
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increased and
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not have anything
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reduce .
By contrast
, we should sympathize with
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.Probably there is some truth in the idea that have many
problems
in society which we should cut down.
On
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hand , one thing
is equally important is that the government takes the lead to reduce these
problems
. The police take the interest of
students
into account or should have many outdoor activities ,
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it is
also
responsible for pupils to polish up their lifestyle and mentality .As
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students
do not have bad things or bad
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.
In addition
, we should bring information about student's rights is widely disseminated by mass media . The most familiar example of
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has the highest happiness rate because the government always focus on improving the lives of people . By
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, we should not exercise
toCorrect your spelling
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much control over their
students
.
In conclusion ,
students
or teenager is
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, so the government or people should
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interestReplace the word
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of more their life and sympathize with them