Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although
it is considered by some people that the promotions are so prevalent and that is
why the target people may not consider it, there are some other opinions who think that the commercial plays a vital role to attract
customers. In my opinion, I believe that because of the availability of social Change preposition
in attracting
media
made advertising commonplace, but stillAdd a comma
,
advertisings
are so ubiquitous and can be seen not only in the print Replace the word
advertisements
media
but also
in electronic media
too. We are bombarded by the jingles and the messages of those ads and feel bored . Even the feeling may get exacerbated and that's why pay no concentration. For example
, during a cricket match, the same promotion repeats and we ignore them entirely hence
failing to persuade us. Another reason is that we have a perception that products without good quality and commitments must need advertising to make a
good sales . Correct article usage
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On the other hand
, there are contrasting views too as it is the best and ever practised way to reach the audiences. Through promotion it is easy to get customers' concentration by using social and any other means of media
and the mass
may come to know about the products or services. Fix the agreement mistake
masses
For example
, young may
people may get fascinated after watching a video clip from a well-known cinema actor and buy the advertised product. Verb problem
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Finally
, in my opinion, though ads can be found everywhere, still it is a
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still a
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medium
media
to provide customers Change preposition
with informtaion
informtaion
on products.Correct your spelling
information
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