Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

Nowadays,
traveling
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is famous around the world.Many local citizens
who
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are always hospitality with
tourism
.
However
, other narrow inhabitants are not welcome to
tourism
because
the
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impact
of
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on
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the environment
throughout
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tourism
throws garbage.So, I will tell you why local residents are both welcoming to
tourists
and wary of foreigners.
Firstly
, currently, the waste issue is the biggest affecting local
people
because many
travelers
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who
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have no responsibility for littering, so they just keep littering without caring about whether it has any impact on
people
.
Due to
the large number of
tourists
, the
government
cannot control the problem of littering. It negatively
impact
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on
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people
’s standard of living.
For example
, In
ThaiLand
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Thailand
, the population is a huge
problems
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problem
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because they
had
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have
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a lot of rubbish on the beach.
In
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furthermore
, the
price
is that it
also
affects
people
.
Many
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famous
place
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places
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, local
people
in those places are willing to raise
prices
to make a profit.That why’s ,a large number of
people
with average living standards cannot live in places with high
prices
.
For instance
, In VietNam , DaLat city where
is
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high
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living standard , many local food has high
price
from 50.000-100.000 dong . It strongly affects local
people
.
Although
reduces waste, it will help
people
feel a better quality of life.
Second,
the
government
needs to sign a ban on littering at tourist attractions , so they will not throw rubbish . The environment will become cleaner.
For example
, In
singapore
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Singapore
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, their ministry always
have
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sign
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a ban and harsh laws on littering.
Moreover
, the
government
must force restaurants to have
prices
listed for
tourists
, so it can control
prices
in a reasonable way so as not to affect
people
. In Danang
city
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, they
dont
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don't
have high
prices
for
tourist
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tourists
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because of the
price
control by
local
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the local
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government
Although
controlled, it
also
depends on the awareness of
people
and
tourists
In short,
people
's attitudes towards
tourists
depend on many factors, both positive and negative.
Tourism
brings economic benefits and cultural exchange
,
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but
also
causes environmental and
price
problems. The
government
needs to implement effective management measures, and
tourists
need to be conscious of respecting local culture and environment.
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