Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
Nowadays,
traveling
is famous around the world.Many local citizensChange the spelling
travelling
who
are always hospitality with Correct pronoun usage
apply
tourism
.However
, other narrow inhabitants are not welcome to tourism
because the
impact Change preposition
of the
of
the environment Change preposition
on
throughout
Change preposition
through
tourism
throws garbage.So, I will tell you why local residents are both welcoming to tourists
and wary of foreigners.
Firstly
, currently, the waste issue is the biggest affecting local people
because many travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
who
have no responsibility for littering, so they just keep littering without caring about whether it has any impact on Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
. Due to
the large number of tourists
, the government
cannot control the problem of littering. It negatively impact
Change the verb form
impacts
on
Change preposition
apply
people
’s standard of living. For example
, In ThaiLand
, the population is a huge Correct your spelling
Thailand
problems
because they Change the noun form
problem
had
a lot of rubbish on the beach. Wrong verb form
have
In
Change preposition
Furthermore
furthermore
, the price
is that it also
affects people
. Many
famous Change preposition
In many
place
, local Change to a plural noun
places
people
in those places are willing to raise prices
to make a profit.That why’s ,a large number of people
with average living standards cannot live in places with high prices
. For instance
, In VietNam , DaLat city where is
Correct pronoun usage
there is
high
living standard , many local food has high Add an article
a high
price
from 50.000-100.000 dong . It strongly affects local people
. Although
reduces waste, it will help people
feel a better quality of life.
Second,
the government
needs to sign a ban on littering at tourist attractions , so they will not throw rubbish . The environment will become cleaner. For example
, In singapore
, their ministry always Change the capitalization
Singapore
have
Change the verb form
has
sign
a ban and harsh laws on littering.Change the verb form
signed
Moreover
, the government
must force restaurants to have prices
listed for tourists
, so it can control prices
in a reasonable way so as not to affect people
. In Danang city
, they Capitalize word
City
dont
have high Correct your spelling
don't
prices
for tourist
because of the Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
price
control by local
Correct article usage
the local
government
Although
controlled, it also
depends on the awareness of people
and tourists
In short, people
's attitudes towards tourists
depend on many factors, both positive and negative. Tourism
brings economic benefits and cultural exchange,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
causes environmental and price
problems. The government
needs to implement effective management measures, and tourists
need to be conscious of respecting local culture and environment.Submitted by sinh.ielts on
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