the bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.

the bar charts below give information on road transport in a number of European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.
The 3 graphs provide information about how the situation of commuting is in some
countries
in Europe.
Overall
, the use of cars outweighs by far all other means of transportation
such
as bus, train, metro, and bike.
According to
the commuting
time
chart, all the
countries
spend more
time
than the
EU
average except Italy. Looking at details, the
EU
average of travel by car, approximately 10000 km, is more than eightfold the
EU
average
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other commuting means. When it comes to
average
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the average
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of travel by car, all the
countries
apart from Germany and Spain were higher than the
EU
average. Appealing is the number of other means by Denmarks which is slightly
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less than
3 times the average. We can notice from the commuting
time
chart, that the UK followed by Germany are the two
countries
with the highest commuting
time
, both of them more than twofold the number of Italy. Spain was nearly equal to the
EU
average.
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