Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - describe where you lived when you were a student at the university - recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation - warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing

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Dear Latifah , I am thrilled to hear that and

the

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things are working out . It is

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great for you to get

this

course at Faisal

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University

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university

I used to study there it is a significant knowledge you will get

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from

university

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the university

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I lived far away from my city

however

, it is

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pleasant

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to take my advice about

this

course and

university

. I have been

live

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near

from

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the

university

almost 5

minuts

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minutes

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walking l used to live alone that was

benefit

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beneficial

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to me I don’t like to live with

sombody

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somebody

I have many

reasonses

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reasons

to live alone

nevertheless

, I have been need someone to help me when I need a help but still it is benefit to me . The best notion to find

apartment

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an apartment

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or accommodation is to ask senior students and there

many

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application

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applications

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provide

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that provide

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accommodation for students the application name is my accommodation you can find it on

website

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the website

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moreover

, there many advertisements at

university

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the university

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I would like to give you some advice as

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friend don’t live with

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a roomate

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roomate

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roommate

roommates

above 4 just live with 2

that’s

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make you comfortable and it would be suitable

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you and you can

sharing

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the food, stuff and rental charge together that was my mistake to live alone I was paid more than I could ,

therefore

do not live alone . I am hoping

hear

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from you again thank you so much to

asked

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about

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my advice. Best wishes , Ruqayah

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

250 words

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