Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - describe where you lived when you were a student at the university - recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation - warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing
Dear Latifah ,
I am thrilled to hear that and friend don’t live with
the
things are working out . It is Correct article usage
apply
a
great for you to get Change the article
apply
this
course at FaisalCorrect your spelling
University
university
I used to study there it is a significant knowledge you will get it
from Correct pronoun usage
apply
university
I lived far away from my city Correct article usage
the university
however
, it is a
Correct article usage
apply
pleasant
to take my advice about Replace the word
pleasure
this
course and university
.
I have been live
near Change the word
living
from
the Change preposition
apply
university
almost 5 minuts
Correct your spelling
minutes
by
walking l used to live alone that was Change preposition
on
benefit
to me I don’t like to live with Replace the word
beneficial
sombody
I have many Correct your spelling
somebody
reasonses
to live alone Correct your spelling
reasons
nevertheless
, I have been need someone to help me when I need a help but still it is benefit to me .
The best notion to find apartment
or accommodation is to ask senior students and there Correct article usage
an apartment
many
Add a missing verb
are many
application
Fix the agreement mistake
applications
provide
accommodation for students the application name is my accommodation you can find it on Correct pronoun usage
that provide
website
Correct article usage
the website
moreover
, there many advertisements at university
I would like to give you some advice asCorrect article usage
the university
Add an article
a
Correct article usage
a roomate
roomate
above 4 just live with 2 Correct your spelling
roommate
roommates
that’s
make you comfortable and it would be suitable Unnecessary verb
that
to
you and you can Change preposition
for
sharing
the food, stuff and rental charge together that was my mistake to live alone I was paid more than I could , Change the form of the verb
share
therefore
do not live alone .
I am hoping hear
from you again thank you so much to Fix the infinitive
to hear
asked
me Change the form of the verb
ask
about
my advice.
Best wishes ,
RuqayahChange preposition
for
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