Write a 150 word letter to a family who are looking for some one to live with them and take care of six year old.

Dear John, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in babysitting your six-year-old kid. I am currently attending high school and after school hours I get 5 hours of free time to spend . my school timings are morning 8 to 1 in the afternoon. after ,that I can spend 5 hours daily babysitting your kid. I do have experience in babysitting as I took care of my neighbour's kids early
this
year for two months. I spend a considerable amount of time with him. teaching him various fun games to enhance his learning abilities like counting and so on. I live nearby your suburb of Haughton. I can daily commute to your address on time and babysit your kid. I promise you won't get disappointed with my babysitting skills. if you want to cross-check my credential, I can provide you with my neighbour's mobile number. Hope to hear from you soon . Best wishes, Monika
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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