Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's foss.0il fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Nowadays fossil fuel is a major factor in society as it is the main component

to be

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used in the production of electricity, transportation, powering industries etc. In

this

essay, we are going to discuss the conservation of fossil

fuels

and alternatives to fossil

fuels

so we can save

resources

However

, there are different ways to conserve

energy

. We can save

resources

if we use is as per our needs and do not waste them.

For example

, not only children but

also

adults sometimes leave the

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while

we are doing other stuff and not even watching the

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. There are many paths available to produce

energy

other than the combustion of fossil

fuels

Firstly

, solar

energy

is a good alternative to produce power rather than burn

resources

For example

, we can install solar panels on the top of the canals and the rivers. So, that the water is

also

preserved and electricity is

also

generated.

Secondly

, Hydraulic sources are

also

useful to save

resources

As we

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can put hydraulic plants on the rivers, or we can make dams to save water

while

also

can produce power.

Lastly

, Wind can

also

produce

energy

by using windmills.

For example

, we can put windmills in coastal areas and even in the mountains where the wind flow is high. In these various, ways we can conserve

energy

and use it more carefully.

Moreover

, as we discussed we need to switch from fossil

fuels

to natural

resources

to produce electricity. We must save

energy

for the future.

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task response

Provide a clear and direct response to the essay prompt, addressing both aspects of conserving fossil fuels and discussing alternatives to fossil fuels in more detail.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that the introduction and conclusion are more explicitly presented, and that the essay is cohesive and logically structured throughout.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's foss.0il fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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