Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's foss.0il fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Nowadays fossil fuel is a major factor in society as it is the main component
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used in the production of electricity, transportation, powering industries etc. In
this
essay, we are going to discuss the conservation of fossil
fuels
and alternatives to fossil
fuels
so we can save
resources
.
However
, there are different ways to conserve
energy
. We can save
resources
if we use is as per our needs and do not waste them.
For example
, not only children but
also
adults sometimes leave the
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on
while
we are doing other stuff and not even watching the
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. There are many paths available to produce
energy
other than the combustion of fossil
fuels
.
Firstly
, solar
energy
is a good alternative to produce power rather than burn
resources
.
For example
, we can install solar panels on the top of the canals and the rivers. So, that the water is
also
preserved and electricity is
also
generated.
Secondly
, Hydraulic sources are
also
useful to save
resources
.
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can put hydraulic plants on the rivers, or we can make dams to save water
while
we
also
can produce power.
Lastly
, Wind can
also
produce
energy
by using windmills.
For example
, we can put windmills in coastal areas and even in the mountains where the wind flow is high. In these various, ways we can conserve
energy
and use it more carefully.
Moreover
, as we discussed we need to switch from fossil
fuels
to natural
resources
to produce electricity. We must save
energy
for the future.
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task response
Provide a clear and direct response to the essay prompt, addressing both aspects of conserving fossil fuels and discussing alternatives to fossil fuels in more detail.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction and conclusion are more explicitly presented, and that the essay is cohesive and logically structured throughout.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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