Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, environmental protection has become a global concern as there are

numbers

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of damages

of

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environment

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the environment

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caused in different ways. In that condition, a number of individuals believe that the principal environmental problem is the extinction of particular

species

of plants and

animals

,

while

others consider that there are more important issues. Based on my knowledge, the reason why some people concern about endangered

species

of plants and

animals

the most is that it breaks

natural

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ecological balance. As is known to all, there are complex food chains between plants and

animals

. If one of the

species

in the food chain

die

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out, there would be many influences on other

species

. And the most important effect is to disrupt the food chain, starving

animals

and those that prey on them or making some of the

species

loss

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their natural enemies.

For example

, rabbits without natural

predator

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predators

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would dig a large number of holes under the ground, which could prevent plant growth in the area.

However

, few people argue that we should pay attention to other environmental problems as well. In our time, there are numerous environmental issues

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people to solve

such

as global warming and water pollution. There is no doubt that global warming can be a serious problem as it causes

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forest fire which kills thousands of trees and

animals

every year.

Also

, it makes the sea level rise, which means there will be more creatures losing their residence.

As for water

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pollution

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caused by industrial sewage and oil spill can easily lead to the death of marine

animals

and illness of human beings. In my opinion, the loss of biodiversity is only one of the important environmental problems these days, other issues

such

as global warming and water pollution cannot

also

be ignored.