Some people say reading the news on the internet is better. Others think newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some
people
say reading
news
on the
Internet
is better. Others think
newspaper
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will remain the most important source of
news
for the majority of
people
. Many humans say reading the
news
on the
Internet
is good. Others think
newspaper
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will remain
the
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important source of
news
for the majority of
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.
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middle reading the
news
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and
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. Nowadays, a lot of
people
prefer reading
news
on the
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because a lot of
people
utilize
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the
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and some sources. The
young
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children not reading
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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because children
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to
on
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the
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and they are
boring
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,
read
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a
newspaper
old
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grandmothers and grandfathers. But a lot of
people
read newspapers because read
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for your health.
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