The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
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The chart presents information about the shift in the elderly population proportion, aged 65 and above in
Canada
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,
Germany
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, and the United Kingdom. It
also
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predicts the trend that will have been seen by 2030. Between 1988 and 2000, the percentage of elderly people aged 65 and above from
Germany
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was 20.45 and 25.32 respectively. These percentages were the highest share when compared with those of
Canada
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and the UK, accounting for 16.32 to 20.67 per
cent
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in
Canada
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and 14.23 to 14.89 in the UK. By 2030,
Germany
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will remain at its top position with the highest rate at 30.42 per
cent
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,
while
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the lowest rate will have been projected at 20.35 per
cent
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in the UK. It is predicted that in
Canada
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will the elderly population will have reached 26.35 per
cent
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in 2030. In brief, the shift in percentage from all three nations will have increased slowly. In
Canada
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, it is expected that the highest rate is found
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Germany
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is to have the highest percentage of people aged 65 and over in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, germany, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage change
  • population
  • aged 65 and above
  • information
  • table
  • data
  • trends
  • patterns
  • comparison
  • predicted
  • future
  • findings
  • comment
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