Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than complete become more successful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

It is hard to say whether competition or cooperation is better. To my opinion, each has its own pros and cons. For competitors, competition helps them think more. During a competition, participants get stressed because of their opponents. Since

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, people’s talents will be fully developed. It thoroughly minimizes the time they need to respond. For cooperators, teamwork seems to help a lot. Sometimes it is hard for anyone of us to solve some of the questions, but cooperation changes

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situation. Everyone shares their own opinion, so together, a team could be unstoppable.

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, each situation has its own drawbacks. Competitions will

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raise the willingness to win for people. In most cases it is great, but in some cases, it would be strong enough to attract you to have some ‘cheating’.

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kind of thing seems to have no effect on teamwork, but cooperation can

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build up the reliability of other people. When you are out of the team, there is no one for you to call for help,

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the ability for you to do things on your own could be weak. So to compete or cooperate have different goals, to create the ability done things on your own or in a team. To summarize, both two things can construct various abilities, so to say each can help to become more successful adults is paradoxical. These pie charts give us

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information about the total spending in a school in three different

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