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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that is is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that is is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
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Nowadays overpopulation is considered to be the biggest
problems
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problem
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 that we, humans face in the globe. There are several added factors to the main issue that are caused by it. Is it really our current most significant threat, or not?
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 essay will elucidate my assertions in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, what is really frustrating about
this
 particular issue is the need
of
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 supplies. As the size of humanity grows, the more food, water,
living
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and living
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 spaces will it need on
the
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 daily basis. The problem is the following: there are finite resources
in
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 the planet. As far as we know, the amount of food needed in 2050 is predicted to
be
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the
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double as it was in 2022.
Although
 the technology is evolving, no proof has been provided regarding real solutions to
this
 matter. From another point of view, more than one billion people are suffering from hunger at the moment, how many will suffer when the population will be around 20 billion?
On the other hand
, climate change is a bigger factor of threat at the moment. There are a bunch of signs telling us that some lands will be unable to live in.
Also
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 the ice caps are melting, which is frightening if we consider the impacts of it
to
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 the oceans. Another enormous problem is nuclear weapons. It is hard to imagine, but humanity can easily find itself in the middle of a nuclear crisis. My impression is that it would eliminate not just human life, but wildlife
also
. Having
this
 question
due to
 consideration, I strongly
belive
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believe
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 that the
continous
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continuous
 rise of
population
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the population
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 is the biggest problem that we are facing at the moment. In fact, it is a threat, but not considered to be the biggest.
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