Some people think certain prisoner should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is widely believed that the need for unpaid community service for punishment
instead
of imprisonment them
. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
statement for a variety of reasons.
I partly agree that there should be community service activities
instead
of prison because people
commit a crime due to
the environment in which they live. This
means that they do not naturally commit crimes, but many other people
's evil activities
have affected them. In fact, if no one accepts them, such
prisoners will tend to repeat the offence. Therefore
, prisoners will have a great chance to reintegrate into society through unpaid work. For example
, Research conducted by a university of law in Germany found that 15 per cent of young people
who spend much time behind bars often turn into worse offenders than those who participate in community activities
.
On the other hand
, I disagree with the viewpoint that serious offenders need to be punished to set an example. Firstly
, crimes such
as murder or robbery are often premeditated. This
is the reason why they dare to commit big criminal activities
because they believe that they will not be detected. Secondly
, they need to be severely punished so that others don't themimitate
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them imitate
For instance
, John who was brutally murdered at an elementary school in New York was sentenced to death by the Federal Court in 2002 to deter people
.
In conclusion, prisoners should take part in unpaid social activities
instead
of going to jail. I'm convinced that those who have committed serious crimes should be imprisoned to set an example.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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