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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates the
overall
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temperature
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 of each month during the year in three different regions, namely
London
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, New
York
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 and
Sydney
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;
Also
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, the sum of the sunshine hours in the mentioned areas within the period is demonstrated in the table. In general,
it is clear that
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 the
temperature
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 pattern in
London
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 and New
York
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 is completely
in contrast
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 with Sydeny’s.
Moreover
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, Londen has the least total sunshine time in
this
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 group. In terms of average
temperature
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, what stands out from the scheme is that
London
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 and New
York
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 approximately follow the same path in the matter of average air
temperature
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.
Conversely
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,
Sydney
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 is in a diverse position; in more detail, it is around 10 and 15 degrees hotter in comparison with
London
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 and New
York
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 respectively in the first and
last
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 months of the year.
However
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, in the middle of the year, New
York
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 and
Sydney
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 are the hottest and coolest cities individually. Regarding the table, it can be seen that New
York
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 and
Sydney
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 are highly close to each other in terms of the whole of sunshine hours during the period.
on the other hand
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,
London
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 with almost half of their hours is in the third rank.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, london, york, sydney with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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