Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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people said that the family is the best place for them to learn how to become a good Correct quantifier usage
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person
in the society
. The family is the
good place to educate the Correct article usage
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since they were born. It's easy to teach them when they are a baby and they will learn quickly than we thought. They will learn though
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, you have to teach them though
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as the teacher. We can not deny the importance of the school
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they will go to school
and they may spend approximately 20 years there. That’s why this
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. To conclude
, I think the family have to train the kid
how to become a good person
in the society
since they were born. And the teachers is
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
