The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future

The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future
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The given map depicts the current condition of the college building and its improvement plan for 2020.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there were drastic changes on the outside and inside college buildings in 2020 compared to the present. Looking into detail, it is apparent that, in 2020, the small area of the car park on the west would have been constructed into a large area, so students,
as well as
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the lecturers, would have more space.
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, there were no roads
due to
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the development of some public places.
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, at present, the garden located in the north of the map would have been replaced by shops, a toilet, and a classroom.
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, the road and bus stop situated on the south of the map would still exist until 2020.
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, in terms of the inside building, there were more classrooms would have been added in 2020 and
also
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the position of the main entrance would have been replaced to the south of the building.
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, the reception office would have been put in the centre of the building near the library.
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, there would be no changes to the lunch area in the future.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout
  • Structure
  • Design
  • Facilities
  • Expansion
  • Renovation
  • Development
  • Aesthetics
  • Functionality
  • Enhancement
  • Sustainability
  • Efficiency
  • Adaptability
  • Capacity
  • Optimization
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