The diagram below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future.

The diagram below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future.
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The given maps depict the current situation of the
college
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building and the plan for transformations in the future.
Overall
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, there would have been a significant change in the
area
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in 2020 and the
college
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would have a wider parking
area
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,
while
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there would be no green
area
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in 2020.
To begin
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with, in the present, the footpath next to the parking
area
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would have been removed by expanding the parking
area
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and the main building of the
college
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.
Furthermore
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, the garden
area
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located on the north of the map would have been transformed into some extended rooms of the main
college
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, which were shops, toilets, and classrooms. Inside the
college
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, the classroom next to the bus stop would have been replaced by a library and
then
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it would have been moved to the right corner by changing the classroom.
Also
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, the toilet on the left side of the library would have been renovated by the entrance and reception where it was located in the middle of the building before.
However
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, the lunch
area
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situated in the centre place would have still remained in 2020.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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