The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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The given graph illustrates how energy sources were spent from 1980 and 2008 and they will be spent over the period of 22 years in the United States. As a whole, coal and petrol and oil have increased from the beginning to now and are predicted to continue to rise until 2030.
In contrast
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,natural gas,nuclear,solar/wind and hydropower have gone through a stable trend until 2023. Moving to the details, the number of petrol and oil fluctuated from 1980 to 2000.
However
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, in the future , they will increase until ending at about 50 quadrillion.
In addition
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, in the initial year, the figure
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coal was about 17 quadrillion, but it will creep up in the future. When it comes to natural gas, it started at 20 quadrillions in 1980, which was higher than nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower about 4 times.
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, it will be stable in the future.
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,the information on nuclear,solar/wind and hydropower was started at the same number. But between the three of them, nuclear is always higher than the other.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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