the following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words

the following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words
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in a European city in the period from 1960 to 2000.
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, it can be seen that car
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sharply increased,
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the others fell over the given time. In detail, even though
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car
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was the least, in 1960, around 7% of
population
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using, it dramatically rose to about 37%, in 2000, which was a five-fold increase.
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bus
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was erratic, because it was moderately used, in 1960, at nearly 17% of humankind, and
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it reached a peak, at 25%, in 1980, but despite
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, in 2000 it fell to be, at about 15%, which was lower than the starting point. On top of that the
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of the other two means of transport, bike and foot, reduced over the period.
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a popular way of moving, in 1960, at approximately 35% of folk, in 2000 it dropped to 5% of
population
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, which was about a seven-time decrease than it began.
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, bike
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was high, at around 25% in 1960, it
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went down to 5%, which means a five-time drop.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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