The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the information associated with tourism in European countries.
Overall
, it has been found that in European countries huge numbers of overseas visited tourist destinations in three major
areas
namely the
coast
, mountains, and
lakes
during the period between 1987 to 2007. In 1987, it has been observed that the tourist mostly preferred to visit the
coast
Replace the word
coastal
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areas
and more than 40
thousand
tourists visited
the coasts
Change to a genitive case
the sides of the coast
show examples
sides
.
However
, the mountains
areas
visitors
' data
shows
Correct subject-verb agreement
show
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that only 20
thousand
foreigners went there and 10
thousand
people visited
the
Change to a genitive case
the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
show examples
lakes
sides
. After 5 years the number of
lakes
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lake
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visitors
surpassed
mountains
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mountain
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visitors
by 30
thousand
and the
coast
areas
tourism declined by 10
thousand
.
However
, it seems that from 1997 to 2007 most tourists are interested in visiting
the
Change to a genitive case
the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
show examples
lakes
sides
and specifically in 2002 more than 70
thousand
foreigners went to
the
Change to a genitive case
the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
show examples
lakes
sides
.
Whereas
, the
coast
visitors
data
also
shows that there is a significantly increased in the
coast
sides
visitors
and in 2007 nearly 80
thousand
people went on
coast
sides
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, coast, lakes, thousand, sides, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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