The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the information associated with tourism in European countries.
Overall
, it has been found that in European countries huge numbers of overseas visited tourist destinations in three major areas
namely the coast
, mountains, and lakes
during the period between 1987 to 2007.
In 1987, it has been observed that the tourist mostly preferred to visit the coast
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coastal
areas
and more than 40 thousand
tourists visited the coasts
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the sides of the coast
sides
. However
, the mountains areas
visitors
' data shows
that only 20 Correct subject-verb agreement
show
thousand
foreigners went there and 10 thousand
people visited the
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the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
lakes
sides
. After 5 years the number of lakes
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lake
visitors
surpassed mountains
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mountain
visitors
by 30 thousand
and the coast
areas
tourism declined by 10 thousand
.
However
, it seems that from 1997 to 2007 most tourists are interested in visiting the
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the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
lakes
sides
and specifically in 2002 more than 70 thousand
foreigners went to the
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the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
lakes
sides
. Whereas
, the coast
visitors
data also
shows that there is a significantly increased in the coast
sides
visitors
and in 2007 nearly 80 thousand
people went on coast
sides
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