The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the information associated with tourism in European countries.
Overall
, it has been found that in European countries huge numbers of overseas visited tourist destinations in three major Linking Words
areas
namely the Use synonyms
coast
, mountains, and Use synonyms
lakes
during the period between 1987 to 2007.
In 1987, it has been observed that the tourist mostly preferred to visit the Use synonyms
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coast
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coastal
areas
and more than 40 Use synonyms
thousand
tourists visited Use synonyms
the coasts
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the sides of the coast
sides
. Use synonyms
However
, the mountains Linking Words
areas
Use synonyms
visitors
' data Use synonyms
shows
that only 20 Correct subject-verb agreement
show
thousand
foreigners went there and 10 Use synonyms
thousand
people visited Use synonyms
the
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the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
lakes
Use synonyms
sides
. After 5 years the number of Use synonyms
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lakes
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lake
visitors
surpassed Use synonyms
mountains
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mountain
visitors
by 30 Use synonyms
thousand
and the Use synonyms
coast
Use synonyms
areas
tourism declined by 10 Use synonyms
thousand
.
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However
, it seems that from 1997 to 2007 most tourists are interested in visiting Linking Words
the
Change to a genitive case
the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
lakes
Use synonyms
sides
and specifically in 2002 more than 70 Use synonyms
thousand
foreigners went to Use synonyms
the
Change to a genitive case
the sides of the lake
the sides of the lakes
lakes
Use synonyms
sides
. Use synonyms
Whereas
, the Linking Words
coast
Use synonyms
visitors
data Use synonyms
also
shows that there is a significantly increased in the Linking Words
coast
Use synonyms
sides
Use synonyms
visitors
and in 2007 nearly 80 Use synonyms
thousand
people went on Use synonyms
coast
Use synonyms
sides
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, coast, lakes, thousand, sides, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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