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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of ths outweigh the disadvantages ?

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In some nations, it is becoming more and more popular for individuals to follow a vegetarian
diet
. In my opinion, the merits of
vegetarian
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diet
 outweigh the demerits because
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
provide
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healthy
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a healthy
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 lifestyle
as well as
 environmentally friendly. On the one hand, there are several downsides for adopt
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
. Plants
is
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lack
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the lack
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 to
essential
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 source of nutrition as protein.
This
 is because protein is very important for
build
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 muscles for
people
 and bones strong against injuries. The second disadvantage, some
people
 have allergic
against
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vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
.
For example
, some find tomato leads to increase
the
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blood pressure and
then
 make them more vulnerable to death.
On the other hand
, I would like to argue that the benefits of
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
significantly
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are significantly
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 more than
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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.
Firstly
,
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
offer
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offers
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health
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healthy
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 food for individuals.
This
 is
dut
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due
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 to
fact
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the fact
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 that,
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
do
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does
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 not
cotains
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contain
contains
 too much fat and salt compared to
meat
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a meat
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diet
, which
this
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apply
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can prevent
people
 to develop serious diseases namely, cancer, heart attack, and obesity.
Secondly
,
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
 can have
a positive impacts
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a positive impact
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 on the environment, because
this
 can educate
people
 to respect animals rights and do not kill them.
Furthermoer
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Furthermore
,
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
 can reduce our
rely
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 on
animals
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animals'
animal's
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 meat, which
this
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apply
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can protect animals from extinction and keep our ecosystem
balance
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balanced
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. In conclusion, In my perspective, the upsides of
vegetarian
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a vegetarian
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diet
 outperform the downsides, because
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vegetarian
diet
 can provide healthy food for
people
 and help them to stay healthy, and
also
 protect creatures from
danager
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danger
 of disappearing.
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