The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Chart illustrates the number of
households
by their annual Use synonyms
income
has Use synonyms
change
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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changed
Overall
, From the different range Linking Words
income
population Use synonyms
has
changed in 2007, 2011 and 2015
In Unnecessary verb
apply
United
state society, there has about 25 Correct article usage
the United
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millions
Change to singular
million
households
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annual
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with annual
income
Use synonyms
less
than $25000 in 2007. And compared with Change preposition
of less
the
2011 and 2015, the number of Correct article usage
apply
households
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has
increased in 2011, Unnecessary verb
apply
Linking Words
that
is almost 28 Correct pronoun usage
which
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millions
people in the US. But Change to singular
million
the
2015 better than 2017, it is only 26 Change the article
apply
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millions
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million
households
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
income
Change preposition
with income
less
than $25000. The Highest Change preposition
of less
income
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families
about 100,000 and more dollars in 2011, it only has 26 Fix the agreement mistake
family
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millions
Change to singular
million
households
. But in 2007 and 2015, the highest Use synonyms
income
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households
has Use synonyms
respective
about 29 Change the word
respectively
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millions
and 33 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
. In Change to singular
million
the
society, there have many Correct article usage
apply
middle
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middle-income
income
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households
. The $25000 - $49,999 Use synonyms
households
in 2007 2011 and 2015 Use synonyms
respective
about 26 Change the word
respectively
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millions
, 29 Fix the agreement mistake
million
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millions
and 26 Fix the agreement mistake
million
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millions
.
The $75000 - $99999 Fix the agreement mistake
million
households
in 2007 2011 and 2015 Use synonyms
respective
about 14 Change the word
respectively
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millions
, 13 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
and 15 Change to singular
million
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millions
. But there has Change to singular
million
a
interesting thing the range of $50000 - $74999 Change the article
an
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households
numbers is Change the noun form
household
same
in the three years.
Correct article usage
the same
Therefore
, only the two Linking Words
range
of Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
low level
Add a hyphen
low-level
income
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households
Use synonyms
has
increased in 2011. And in 2015 most of the Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
households
annual Change noun form
household's
households'
income
Use synonyms
has
improved.Unnecessary verb
apply
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