The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Chart illustrates the number of
households
by their annual income
has change
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Change the verb form
changed
Overall
, From the different range income
population has
changed in 2007, 2011 and 2015
In Unnecessary verb
apply
United
state society, there has about 25 Correct article usage
the United
millions
Change to singular
million
households
annual
Change preposition
with annual
income
less
than $25000 in 2007. And compared with Change preposition
of less
the
2011 and 2015, the number of Correct article usage
apply
households
has
increased in 2011, Unnecessary verb
apply
that
is almost 28 Correct pronoun usage
which
millions
people in the US. But Change to singular
million
the
2015 better than 2017, it is only 26 Change the article
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
households
income
Change preposition
with income
less
than $25000. The Highest Change preposition
of less
income
families
about 100,000 and more dollars in 2011, it only has 26 Fix the agreement mistake
family
millions
Change to singular
million
households
. But in 2007 and 2015, the highest income
households
has respective
about 29 Change the word
respectively
millions
and 33 Change to singular
million
millions
. In Change to singular
million
the
society, there have many Correct article usage
apply
middle
Add a hyphen
middle-income
income
households
. The $25000 - $49,999 households
in 2007 2011 and 2015 respective
about 26 Change the word
respectively
millions
, 29 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
and 26 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
.
The $75000 - $99999 Fix the agreement mistake
million
households
in 2007 2011 and 2015 respective
about 14 Change the word
respectively
millions
, 13 Change to singular
million
millions
and 15 Change to singular
million
millions
. But there has Change to singular
million
a
interesting thing the range of $50000 - $74999 Change the article
an
households
numbers is Change the noun form
household
same
in the three years.
Correct article usage
the same
Therefore
, only the two range
of Fix the agreement mistake
ranges
low level
Add a hyphen
low-level
income
households
has
increased in 2011. And in 2015 most of the Unnecessary verb
apply
households
annual Change noun form
household's
households'
income
has
improved.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, income, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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