Some people think computers and the Internet are more important in child’s education. Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, the way we learn

knowledge

is various

due to

the popularization of advanced technology which makes studying flexible and easier compared to the past. During the covid-19 everyone benefits from

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distance learning and online study resources, allowing

children

to accept

knowledge

at home.

While

they are helpful assistance to students,

but

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schools and

teachers

are still necessary. Some people believe that computers and the internet had penetrate

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the educational sector, and it becomes a vital part of youth teaching.

For example

, during covid-19 distance learning replaced face-to-face

class

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classes

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which reduce the chance of getting infection with covid-19, even now everything is back to normal but still some

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tutorial sessions are conducting via

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the internet

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internet

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.

Internet

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also

allows

children

to catch up on missing

knowledge

from some video media, like YouTube and The Study Room which I used most frequently. Some online

teachers

have uploaded useful resources and revision materials on websites, helping students to understand some trick parts from

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book

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and especially when exams

coming

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they become

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effective checklist for

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the student

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student

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. Others think schools and

teachers

are important in

teenagers

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study stage.

This

can be explained by young

children

are immature and easily led, so

teachers

be good

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to them, teaching them how to be a responsible

person

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to

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society and

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towards to right way, those are more valuable than the basic

knowledge

we accept from classes.

On the other hand

, School gathers

children

together, we cultivate other skills as well, critical thinking, communication skills and so on. Allowing us to be confident and

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the life we expected. From my perspective, the above points are complementary to each other, if we can combine them effectively and applied to

children

’s education, it may have flawless effects. Thinking about how to make them co-exist

instead

compare the

two-sides

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of them as they are both vital in

children

’s teaching in the current stage.