the table and pie chart below give information about population of Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Write at least 150 words for this task.

the table and pie chart below give information about population of Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Write at least 150 words for this task.
The pie chart shows us the different citizen nationalities in
Australia
,
while
the population of each nationality in certain areas are shown by the table.
Overall
, the chart has given us the information that the highest nation in
Australia
is
Australia
. The table
also
shows that the percentage of people living in the city is always higher than those who live in the
countryside
. The population of
Australia
take up 73% of the whole Australian population followed by other nations which has 14%. Moving on to the British with 7%, New Zealanders with 3%, Chinese and Dutch with the lowest per cent all illustrated by the pie chart. The table, on the other ,hand shows that only a marginal amount of a citizen who lives in
Australia
chose to live in the
countryside
. The Australian, British and Dutch have about 80 to almost 90% of people living in the city
,
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and only 11 to 20% of who live in the
countryside
.
However
, New Zealander and Chinese has about 90 to 99% of people live in the city and a small per cent 1 to 10 of them live in the
countryside
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic data
  • population distribution
  • nationality groups
  • urban planning
  • cultural diversity
  • social policy
  • demographic trends
  • rural vs. urban distribution
  • reflect on the implications
  • cultural exchange
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