Bar chart shows the percentage of time that Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013
The multiple bar chart demonstrates how much Australian parents contribute to aiding their children in daily activities.
Overall
, mothers' contribution is superior to that of fathers
'. Maternal support in dressing has the highest percentage, 72%.
Australian mothers unequivocally hold the supreme hand in helping their kids to dress up. Their comparative scores with fathers
are 72% versus 1%. These mothers are also
superior in the help given for homework, with more than half of such
support, while
fathers
only counted for merely one-tenth.
There are some activities in which both parents' cooperation demonstrates the highest percentage that are
categorised under two names: playing games and preparing for bed, with corresponding percentages of 70 and 50 per cent. Change the verb form
is
Fathers
, on the other hand
, have demonstrated no maximum support in the study. Their highest and lowest contributions were in homework and dressing, 10 and 1 per cent respectively.Submitted by f.farkhany71 on
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