The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The graphs illustrate the travel to and from the United Kingdom,
also
the most common nations for English residents to visit.
Overall
, in the first chart, it can be clearly seen that more than 50 million visits abroad by British habitats were the highest in 1999 compared to other years. In addition
, according to
the second ,chart the most favoured place visited by English people was France in 1999.
According to
the first graph, visits abroad by British citizens were growing stable until 1985, but it followed by a rapid increase after 1986. Also
, visit to Great Britain by tourists were increasing gradually until 1985, but after ,that there was a slight change in the number of individuals who visit the UK. The highest number of visits to England by overseas residents was in 1999 (nearly 30 million).
Another popular nation visited by English people was Spain in 1999. The least favoured country by UK habitats was Turkey in 1999.Submitted by shansharova.assel on
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