Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays

artists

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, who create masterpieces in the modern style, get a decent sum of money for their

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,

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other people in

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profession are not paid well.

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, local

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ought to undertake some actions to solve

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issue. I totally share

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point of view.

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,

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should financially maintain each artist despite his

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his contribution to a state`s culture and the demonstration of public concerns through his

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.

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, painters of various genres should be officially endorsed in order to evolve the domain of

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in their countries. One of the reasons I agree that

governments

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should take steps to resolve

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unfair situation is that each artist ought to possess enough money and sources to purchase materials for his job to pursue it.

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, politicians should provide each painter with an opportunity to create his

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to portray the political and economic views, daily routine and cultural heritage of a country.

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, modern

artists

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are not able to represent by paints and colours conventional activities carried out by local people,

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traditional

artists

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can indicate the way how their nations subsist and showcase the history of their regions to prospective descendants.

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, in the 19th century, German

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encouraged all types of

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and especially traditional ones since local politicians acknowledged that

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forms of

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indicated public views and concerns and could be exploited to enhance residents` lives

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the hidden messages in

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type of

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.

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,

governments

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ought to financially uphold all types of

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as nowadays trends of

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vary

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promptly. It is evident that in the next decades sculpture, pottery and ceramics will outrace the popularity of

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modern

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.

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, local

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should pay attention to all pieces of

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despite public desires and interests to prompt

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progress in

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field.

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prime example could be the masterpiece of the prominent French artist Degas. He used to paint only when he received a government grant for his activity and got an overwhelming amount of orders as local

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were eager to evolve

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a genre of

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as impressionism.

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, I insist that

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ought to implement urgent measures to improve the financial state of other

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due to

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their roles in

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culture and the potential demand for their

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in the nearest future.

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, the required legislation dedicated to the reduction of

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social inequality should be introduced immediately in order to tackle

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the aforementioned issue.