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Children's educaton is expensive. In some countries the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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Education
 is very vital in a
person
's life.
However
, it is getting more and more expensive to afford it. In other nations, it is subsidised by the
government
 and I believe the benefits exceed its drawbacks. There are myriad reasons why
education
 should be prioritized by the
government
 when it comes to allocating budget.
Firstly
, it is a tool for every child when they look for employment. Being able to graduate means more opportunities
thus
 enhancing their life
as well as
 the economy of the country.
For instance
, a
person
 who has an
education
 will be able to find jobs easily compared to those who do not .
Furthermore
, if everyone is educated, there will be a low unemployment rate leading to an increase in the GDP of the country.
Secondly
, it will be of big help to avoid being scammed by opportunistic individuals. Recently, there are lots of scammers across the world using different strategies for their bad intentions. If a
person
 is knowledgeable, he or she will be able to distinguish if the information being given to him or her is fact or fake news. In the Philippines,
for example
, those who are below the poverty line, and who are unable to go to school, are the targets of the bad people to get their money illegally.
This
 situation could be halted if and only if everyone has been taught in schools.
On the other hand
, some people will argue that there are other sects of the
government
 that should be given priority like health and security. These two are
also
 important but without proper
education
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 there will be lesser capable doctors, nurses or allied health professionals in the hospital to cater for our needs. Without learning from school, no one would be able to develop strategies or machines to help protect us in times of need. Everything will fall into an umbrella-type wherein
education
 is on top and the rest will be under it. To recapitulate, there are various sectors that the
government
 should look after but for me, they should focus mostly on
education
 as it is the building block of all the different departments. Having an
education
, a
person
 will have more opportunities in life
as well as
 be of help to uplift the economy of the country.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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