The chart belor gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the yerat 1990 and 2010.

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The chart examines levels of donations by different age groups in Great Britain.

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, a greater percentage of Britons gave money to charity in 1990 than in 2010.

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, between the two years, the trend varies among those that are younger or older than 50 years old. In 1990, 42% of people aged between 35, and 50 donated to charity, which is the highest in the graph.

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, the 18-25 year-olds were the least generous, at just 17% in the same year. By 2010, these numbers had dropped considerably, with 35% for the age of 35 and more and 7% for the under-25 donors respectively. The level of donations from 26-35-year-olds

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fell in 2010, from 31% to 24%.

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donations by people under 50 dropped in both years but they rose among those aged between 51 and 65, from 35% to almost 40%. They made

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age group the highest one. The figure for the over-65s is lower, at 35%, but still higher than the 1990 statistic of 32%.

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