Your family is going to celebrate an occassion and your child needs a day off from school. Write a letter to the head master of the school. What the occassion is? Why it is importnat that your child attends the celebration? How your child is going to make up for the missed lessons.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request a day off from school for Marty

due to

an important family gathering

this

Tuesday. Allow me to elaborate on

this

situation. As you may know, Marty`s father, Emmet, is working for the space company as a technical consultant. Two weeks ago he was honoured to be invited on a mission to the International Space Station and

this

Tuesday he is coming back home.

That is

why we are preparing a warm welcome party. My son is extremely proud of his father and always looks after him. He is so excited to

finally

meet his hero. Marty spent days preparing a song as a present and looking forward to being at home when Emmet arrives. We fully understand that Marty has to catch up on the missed lessons. We will ask his friend Jessica to bring his books and homework assignments and I will make sure that

this

child will do them on the weekend. Look forward to hearing from you. Kind Regards, Daulet Tumbayev.

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8 paragraphs

174 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Your family is going to celebrate an occassion and your child needs a day off from school. Write a letter to the head master of the school. What the occassion is? Why it is importnat that your child attends the celebration? How your child is going to make up for the missed lessons.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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