Some people believe that it is very important to make a large amount of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Currently,
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is an integral element of every human being and without ,it we will be unable to make any progress in material terms. It is the view of some individuals that
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is essential and should be made in huge sums
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others are content with earning a good amount of
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for daily expenses. I will discuss these perspectives and at ,
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give my thoughts on it. To start with, making ransom amounts of cash is vital but should
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be made legally. When you have a lot of
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, you are
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off from the poverty line as people say meaning you're able to buy whatever you need or want.
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, purchasing the latest cars, building mansions and affording first-class flights etc.
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, those that believe in having huge sums of capital think that with that you gain a lot of respect from people and get the chance to lead in political actions since they have properties to convince others. A study was made to know the qualities of running for a presidential seat in Ghana in 2009. it showed and said that billionaires and big men with assets are always chosen to run for elections.
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, making large sums of cash is essential since it solves all monetary problems and closes the gap in poverty.
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, it is
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not about having plenty of
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but rather having the
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to help you leave life smoothly enough. It is the dream of many people to have enough
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to help them afford basic living expenses and to be able to feed their families with the
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they make and not necessarily not being huge amounts.
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, a man will be happy when his family has a place to live, has a car, afford good health care and is able to purchase everything they want
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afford good schools for his children.
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person will not think that he should make large amounts of cash before enjoying
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lifestyle but will work hard to maintain
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status. In conclusion, from my perspective ,I believe
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is an important factor in our society and must be made wisely and legally without involving in bad deeds for it. So having a lot of
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is good enough for you to live your dream life and being satisfied with what you earn, provided you live a happy and comfortable lifestyle is
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great.
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