The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts compare various reasons for flight delays, especially in Asian land in 2015 and 2016.

Overall

it is clear that

airline operation management was a big reason for delays in both years, mostly followed by

air

traffic control and bad weather.

Firstly

, Airline operation management was leading to delays 2/5

overall

causes. The next reason was

air

traffic domination which was 1/4 in all pie charts in 2015. Bad weather was similar to

air

authority but less than it. it is approximately 1/5 in 2015. Airport security and military factors were the lowest percentages for all reasons in both years. in 2016 we can see airline operation management higher than in the previous year. it was %46 in 2016.

However

, the

Air

traffic authority improve by %12

accordingly

last

year. Bad weather was almost steadily the same

this

year.

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