IELTS Essay Task 1: Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates vehicle preferences among youth in a year in The
UK
, United States
, France
, and Italy. Overall
, it can be seen that car
is in first position in all of the countries except in France
while
the motorcycle is in last
position in all of the countries except in the United States
.
In terms of Car
, it is in first position both in the Fix the agreement mistake
Cars
UK
and France
with exact
60 Change the word
exactly
people
. In Italy, there are more than 70 community
that choose Fix the agreement mistake
communities
car
as their transport. Add an article
a car
the car
Lastly
, there are 40 people
that use car
in Add an article
the car
a car
France
which are
the lowest among these four nations.
Regarding Motorcycle, the bar chart tells us that there are only a few Correct subject-verb agreement
is
people
that use the transport. In the United States
, there are only 30 people
that use motorcycle
and Fix the agreement mistake
motorcycles
then
followed by France
with 11 people
, the UK
with 10 people
, and Italy with 9 people
.
In terms of Bicycle
, there are 30 young Fix the agreement mistake
Bicycles
people
that ride bicycles in the UK
. The number is decreased to 10 people
in United
Correct article usage
the United
States
. In France
, there are almost 50 people
that ride bicycles which is the highest among these four countries. Lastly
, there are more than 10 people
that ride bicycles in Italy.Submitted by rully2010 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "lastly".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, states, france, car, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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