The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates the manufacturing
process
of construction bricks. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
process
starts with digging Use synonyms
clay
out of the ground, and the Use synonyms
last
thing in the procedure is delivering it to the right place.
The first spet is to harrow the Linking Words
clay
with the help of an excavator after they put the Use synonyms
clay
on the metal grid in order to make the Use synonyms
clay
smaller. Following that, it gets to the roller after it got smaller, and in the next step of the Use synonyms
process
, they add water and sand to the Use synonyms
clay
and Use synonyms
then
put it through the wire cutter or the mould, so it becomes the shape of a rectangular.
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Furthermore
, the bricks Linking Words
finally
are getting to the oven to dry for 24-28 hours. The next step after they dry is to put them into the oven, Linking Words
first,
they go to a moderate kiln with 200 C-980 C, Linking Words
then
the bricks get to the more high temperatures like 870 C- 1300 C and Linking Words
then
it is put into the cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Linking Words
Lastly
, it goes through the Linking Words
process
of packing and it is ready for delivery.Use synonyms
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