The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following diagram illustrates the manufacturing
process
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of construction bricks.
Overall
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, the
process
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starts with digging
clay
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out of the ground, and the
last
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thing in the procedure is delivering it to the right place. The first spet is to harrow the
clay
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with the help of an excavator after they put the
clay
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on the metal grid in order to make the
clay
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smaller. Following that, it gets to the roller after it got smaller, and in the next step of the
process
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, they add water and sand to the
clay
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and
then
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put it through the wire cutter or the mould, so it becomes the shape of a rectangular.
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, the bricks
finally
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are getting to the oven to dry for 24-28 hours. The next step after they dry is to put them into the oven,
first,
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they go to a moderate kiln with 200 C-980 C,
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the bricks get to the more high temperatures like 870 C- 1300 C and
then
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it is put into the cooling chamber for 48-72 hours.
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, it goes through the
process
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of packing and it is ready for delivery.
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