The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the median monthly alter in the prices of three different forms of

metals

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namely , copper, nickel,

zinc

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in a specific year.

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,

it is clear that

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all types of

metals

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fluctuated during the given period, and

also

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all

metals

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reach the

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peak, lowest, unchanged at

certain

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month

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months

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, and

the

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nickel showed dramatically dropped

comapred

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compared

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. Looking at the chart in more detail, regarding nickel ,in

january

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January

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the

precentage

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percentage

of changed highest was 6%

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after two months showed declined

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around 1 % ,and in Jane reach the lowest point

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-3 % and

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from July to

september

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September

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showed unchanged almost -1 % and

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showed increased until December almost 1%.

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, in January the zinc lowest

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was almost 1% and after that in February

reach

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reached

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a zenith at approximately 3% and

lowset

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lowest

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at Jane and October

alround

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around

was -1 % and from November until de December showed

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the highest

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changed

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compared to other

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from

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1.5 to 2 % .In terms of copper, reach the

lowst

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lowest

lost

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from May to June was

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around

-0.5 %, and from June to October remain constant at 0.5%

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in

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September has become the second

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changed

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was approximately 1.5%.